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So i have created an idea for a new Marvel superhero. Any thoughts?



Basic Information
Real Name Andrew Jonathan Estes
Alias Colt Winchester
Species Human
Citizenship United States of America
Gender Male
Date of Birth March 31, 1966
Place of Birth Fort Sumter, New Mexico, North America, Earth
Height 5' 8"
Weight 145 lbs.
Clearance Level 8
Serial Number 123456789
Title(s) Agent of S.H.I.E.L.D. (formerly)
Affiliation US Army (formerly), S.H.I.E.L.D. (formerly), Avengers
Status Alive
Story:
Title: "Shattered Resilience"

In the heart of 2011 New York, Andrew Jonathan Estes led a seemingly ordinary life. A loving husband and father, Andrew's world was shattered one fateful night when a gang of ruthless gangsters, misled by a twisted mafia, invaded his home. The attackers, searching for a target with a misspelled house number, mistook Andrew's family for their intended victim.

Tragedy unfolded as the gangsters unleashed brutality upon Andrew and his family. His wife and young daughter fell victim to the assailants, leaving his hidden son as the lone survivor. Andrew, left for dead after a relentless beating, slipped into a coma, his body battered and broken.

However, his journey was far from over. As Andrew lay unconscious, the severe blows to his head triggered an extraordinary transformation. His brain, affected by the trauma, awakened dormant abilities that surpassed the limits of human potential. Emerging from the coma, Andrew discovered that he was reborn with superhuman senses and physical prowess.

Taking on the mantle of Colt Winchester, Andrew embraced his newfound abilities. His vision, now three times sharper than that of a falcon, allowed him to shoot with unparalleled accuracy over great distances. His sense of smell became so acute that he could detect a person's perfume from miles away. Auditory senses honed to perfection, Colt could hear the softest whispers from kilometers apart.

His touch, altered by the traumatic event, granted him preternatural reflexes, enabling him to dodge even the swiftest blows. Colt's heightened tactile perception allowed him to see the world in super slow motion, predicting actions before they unfolded. Enhanced physical stamina and mental concentration became his allies, propelling him into a league of his own.

Driven by a thirst for justice, Colt Winchester embarked on a relentless quest to unravel the conspiracy behind the mistaken attack on his family. Investigating the criminal underworld, he left his mark on those who preyed on the innocent.

Colt's journey did not go unnoticed. His heroic actions attracted the attention of Tony Stark, the genius behind the Iron Man suit. Recognizing Colt's resilience and determination, Stark forged an alliance, providing him with a state-of-the-art suit that complemented his extraordinary abilities.

As Colt Winchester rose to prominence, he faced moral dilemmas and challenges that tested his resolve. The climax of his journey culminated in a showdown with the criminals responsible for his family's tragedy. Justice prevailed, but the emotional aftermath left Colt grappling with the scars of his past.

The legacy of Colt Winchester endured as a symbol of resilience, justice, and the unyielding spirit of a man shattered and reborn. In the shadows of 2011 New York, a new hero emerged, his story echoing with the strength found in the midst of shattered resilience.

Villian:
Specterbane
Specterbane is a former colleague of Tony Stark who became obsessed with harnessing the power of ethereal entities. Using stolen Stark technology, Specterbane developed a suit that allows him to manipulate and control ghostly energies.

Specterbane's abilities include phasing through solid objects, summoning spectral minions, and projecting energy blasts. His vendetta against Tony Stark extends to Colt Winchester, as he sees them both as obstacles to his quest for ultimate power.

Driven by a personal grudge and a desire for god-like abilities, Specterbane becomes a recurring antagonist for Colt. The clash between Colt's resilience and Specterbane's spectral powers could lead to intense battles and moral dilemmas, adding depth to their dynamic.

Colt Winchester faces a formidable challenge in defeating Specterbane. To counter Specterbane's spectral powers, Colt modifies his suit with Stark's assistance, incorporating advanced spectral disruptors. These disruptors emit frequencies that destabilize the ethereal energies Specterbane manipulates.

Colt's strategy involves using his heightened senses to anticipate Specterbane's ghostly maneuvers, allowing him to strike with precision. The battle unfolds in a dimension between the physical and spectral realms, testing Colt's resilience and strategic prowess.

Recognizing that Specterbane's obsession with power is his weakness, Colt appeals to his humanity, sharing a parallel experience of loss and the importance of resilience. This emotional connection causes Specterbane to momentarily question his path, providing Colt with a crucial opportunity.

In a climactic showdown, Colt deploys a combination of his enhanced physical abilities, advanced technology, and a deep understanding of Specterbane's vulnerabilities. The battle concludes with Colt using a specially designed energy-disrupting projectile, neutralizing Specterbane's powers and restoring balance.

The defeat serves as a turning point for Specterbane, opening the possibility of redemption. Colt's triumph not only secures justice but also highlights the theme of shattered resilience and the potential for healing and redemption even in the face of darkness.

Equipment
Enhanced Suit:
A specially designed suit that complements Colt's abilities. It could provide additional protection, enhance mobility, and integrate with his sensory enhancements. Colt Winchester's enhanced suit is a marvel of cutting-edge technology, crafted to amplify his superhuman abilities and provide optimal functionality in the field. Here are some features of the suit:

Protective Nanofiber Material:
The suit is made from a lightweight but incredibly durable nanofiber material. It provides enhanced protection against physical threats while maintaining flexibility for agile movements.

Sensory Integration:
The suit is designed to seamlessly integrate with Colt's enhanced senses. Advanced sensors embedded in the fabric enhance his vision, hearing, and touch, feeding real-time data to his brain and enhancing his situational awareness.

Adaptive Camouflage:
The suit incorporates adaptive camouflage technology, allowing Colt to blend into his surroundings. This feature is especially useful for stealth missions and surprise attacks.

Augmented Reality Interface:
A heads-up display (HUD) within the suit's visor provides Colt with vital information, including mission objectives, enemy locations, and environmental data. It can also overlay analysis tools and highlight points of interest.

Kinetic Energy Absorption:
The suit is equipped with technology that absorbs and stores kinetic energy from physical impacts. This stored energy can be redirected for enhanced strength or released as a defensive shockwave.

Enhanced Mobility Systems:
Integrated exoskeleton components assist Colt in achieving extraordinary feats of agility and strength. This includes enhanced jumping capabilities, swift maneuvers, and increased running speed.

Self-Repairing Technology:
Nanobots within the suit can repair minor damages on the fly, ensuring that Colt remains in peak condition during intense battles.

Biometric Locking System:
The suit can only be activated by Colt Winchester, ensuring that it remains under his control and prevents unauthorized use.

This enhanced suit not only serves as Colt's armor but acts as a technological companion, empowering him to face the challenges of his superhero journey with confidence and efficiency.

Communications Device:
A state-of-the-art communication system integrated into Colt's suit, allowing him to stay connected with allies, gather intel, and coordinate actions.

Utility Belt:
Equipped with various tools and gadgets to assist in different situations. This could include a grappling hook, a compact medical kit, and other utility devices.

Stealth Tech:
Specialized technology to enhance Colt's stealth capabilities, such as a cloaking device or noise-dampening technology.

Tracking Device:
A device to help Colt track individuals or objects, fitting well with his heightened senses. This could be useful for investigations or locating targets.

Enhanced Vision Goggles:
While his natural vision is enhanced, specialized goggles could offer additional features like night vision, thermal imaging, or analysis tools.

Vehicles
Horse, nicknamed Bullet, armored with Titanium plates
Jeep
Personal Motorcycle, takes the form of a Pet cyborg goat called Mikey the Kidd
Quinjet
Pet cyborg rattle snake named Rasputin

Weapons
Firearms
Primary Weapons:

1945 Repeat Load Winchester (Primary Weapon):
Emphasize the historical connection and sentimental value.

Colt Single Action Army .45 Revolvers (Peacemakers - Primary Weapon):
Iconic, ties to his superhero name.

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Sidearms:
Beretta Cheetahs: Sleek and reliable.
Desert Eagle .357 Magnums (Gold Finish):
Adds a touch of flair.

Specialized Weapons:
Electric Shocker Hand Guns:
Useful for non-lethal situations.

Winchester Model 1873 Carbine Rifle:
Versatile for ranged combat.

Melee style weapons
Cavalry sabers:
Durable and effective for cutting.

Quarterstaff:
Offers reach and defensive capabilities.

Retractable Sword:
Versatile and easy to carry.

Energy-infused throwing knives:
Provide a ranged option.

S.H.I.E.L.D. Arsenal
Beretta 92FS
Walther CP99
Colt M1911A1 with a tactical flashlight
FN P90
M16A4 fitted with a C-More red dot sight & KAC railed handguard
Short-barreled SIG-Sauer SG552 with pronged flash hider, standard diopter sights & the stock folded.

Attributes:
Durability: 3
Energy Projection: 2
Fighting Skills: 6
Intelligence: 3
Speed: 2
Strength: 3
That would put him about equal to the Winter Soldier & Spider-Man (both are 3.2), & more powerful than Captain America (3).

Spider-Man is 3,1,4,4,3,4
Winter Soldier is 4,1,6,2,2,4

Notes
Participates in the following battles:
2012: Battle of New York
He joins Captain America on the ground clearing civilians and keeping the Chitauri out of the buildings.

2015: Battle of Sokovia

2018: Battle of Wakanda
He survives the Snap and becomes one of the people doing the Time Heist

2023: Second Battle of New York

New Notes
Heightened senses:

1. Vision is 3 times greater & better than that of a falcon, which allows him to shoot up to 7 km distance right at the target.

2. Sense of smell is so great that he can smell a person's perfume from 5 km away

3. He can hear even the smallest ants in caves, which can help him hear his enemies from a kilometer away, even if they are only whispering.

4. His touch is such that it has given him the ability to dodge extremely fast blows & attacks. He can also see in super slow motion & have the ability to predict what will happen around him.

5. Improved physical stamina & improved mental concentration.

Setting: 2011
Story:
The origin of your abilities

He gained his abilities after being brutally beaten by bats. His attackers were gangsters who went to the wrong house & entered his.

The gangsters thought that he was the person they had to eradicate, so they entered his house, killed his wife & little daughter with a Winchester, leaving his hidden son.

They then brutally beat him on the head & his entire body.

He was left in a coma, but he recovered very quickly.

That was because the blows to his head activated the maximum capacity of his brain.

The blows to his skull affected his brain, which caused all his senses & physical abilities to improve.

You could say he uses a Winchester because it's the gun they killed his family with.

I think it would be great if he killed the gangsters who murdered his family & kept the weapon that ended his happiness to be a justice.

Answered questions:
Simple, he came out of the coma easily thanks to the super capacity that his brain obtained. His brain was affected by the blows & that caused him to awaken his true abilities From her body.

Heals more easily, his body no longer has limits.

Can exercise 100% or more of all bodily abilities

Hence he could wake up from a coma without so many injuries.

You will get the suit when you become a recognized hero. Stark will give it to him as a kind of recognition.

I consider the act of the gangsters against him. It's simple, the gangsters had the wrong house & family.

They attacked the wrong family, because the house number they had was misspelled.

To make everything more dramatic, we can pretend that the house number that the gangsters had had been altered by another mafia.

For example, I think it would be great if the protagonist found out something very dark when he is investigating the mafia that ruined his life.

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sense of smell became so acute that he could detect a person's perfume from miles away. Auditory senses honed to perfection, Colt could hear the softest whispers from kilometers apart.
If that were the case he would be dead pretty soon, his senses would be so over powered that he would go mad, or likely kill himself. The number of people just talking within a "kilometers" radius would be huge in a city. He can hear them whisper, imagine how loud that is going to be with hundreds or thousands all talking normally. God forbid he went to a football match with 50-60,000 people all cheering within 500m.
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IanKennedy wrote: Fri May 03, 2024 10:02 pm
sense of smell became so acute that he could detect a person's perfume from miles away. Auditory senses honed to perfection, Colt could hear the softest whispers from kilometers apart.
If that were the case he would be dead pretty soon, his senses would be so over powered that he would go mad, or likely kill himself. The number of people just talking within a "kilometers" radius would be huge in a city. He can hear them whisper, imagine how loud that is going to be with hundreds or thousands all talking normally. God forbid he went to a football match with 50-60,000 people all cheering within 500m.

So lower the senses a little bit? How far do you believe the range would be?
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Meste17 wrote: Fri May 03, 2024 11:37 pm
IanKennedy wrote: Fri May 03, 2024 10:02 pm
sense of smell became so acute that he could detect a person's perfume from miles away. Auditory senses honed to perfection, Colt could hear the softest whispers from kilometers apart.
If that were the case he would be dead pretty soon, his senses would be so over powered that he would go mad, or likely kill himself. The number of people just talking within a "kilometers" radius would be huge in a city. He can hear them whisper, imagine how loud that is going to be with hundreds or thousands all talking normally. God forbid he went to a football match with 50-60,000 people all cheering within 500m.

So lower the senses a little bit? How far do you believe the range would be?
Superman has this ability though probably more amplified. He can hear everything but can focus on just one thing or tune it out. Your hero can just simply do that, enhanced brain and all.
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McAvoy wrote: Sat May 04, 2024 4:14 am
Meste17 wrote: Fri May 03, 2024 11:37 pm
IanKennedy wrote: Fri May 03, 2024 10:02 pm

If that were the case he would be dead pretty soon, his senses would be so over powered that he would go mad, or likely kill himself. The number of people just talking within a "kilometers" radius would be huge in a city. He can hear them whisper, imagine how loud that is going to be with hundreds or thousands all talking normally. God forbid he went to a football match with 50-60,000 people all cheering within 500m.

So lower the senses a little bit? How far do you believe the range would be?
Superman has this ability though probably more amplified. He can hear everything but can focus on just one thing or tune it out. Your hero can just simply do that, enhanced brain and all.
Then i shall do that. Thank you very much.

Anything else? :)
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It's not bad. More of a street level type of superhero which is fine. Spider-Man despite his prowess like strength and agility is considered a street level superhero. Though he can hang with the best of them.
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McAvoy wrote: Sun May 05, 2024 4:40 am It's not bad. More of a street level type of superhero which is fine. Spider-Man despite his prowess like strength and agility is considered a street level superhero. Though he can hang with the best of them.
Thank you, i REALLY appreciate that. A LOT of creative work had gone into this. It's been over a year now. :)
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Update:

I was discussing some ideas with my cousin, and he suggested the same thing about Colt being a street type level superhero, but he also suggested having psychokinetic abilities like a character named Lucy, from the 2014 movie of the same name.

Here is the link for reference: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lucy_(2014_film)

Thoughts?
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